Suzie Eisfelder
November 23, 2011

He was just wandering back and forth in front of the store, looking so normal I may not have remembered him if it hadn’t been for the horn-rimmed glasses he was wearing.  They look uncomfortable on him as if he wasn’t really used to wearing them.  There was nothing to make him really stand out, no taller than me and reminding me very much of my two boys.

My boys! I’ll meet them at the banquet, it’s not far and I’ll see them go in from here.

I watched him as he came through the door and picked up a few things in the store, not much, just the Saturday Evening Post, Reader’s Digest and a few things for an older person; aftershave, fingernail clippers and a package of pipe tobacco.  I did wonder what his game was, had he been dared to steal a few things?

As he approached the cash register I acted normal, I smiled and asked how he was today. “Grand” he said. After I added up the bill I asked him if there was anything else. “I believe that will do the trick.” Polite, he was, it impressed me and made me think well of his mother.

He didn’t have any money, checked his pockets thoroughly and apologised for leaving his wallet at home.  I liked him for offering to put everything back on the shelf but declined, I do like doing it myself to stop them taking it on their way out the door.  But he turned back to offer me a check and that’s when I realised what the game was. Play along, I thought, just for a while, then give Albert the signal to dial 911.

The check was loose, one of those convenience checks you pick up at the bank nearby. Didn’t make it out for the total but for $50. Oh, he did ask but didn’t really expect an answer.  I don’t think he heard the hesitation in my voice when I agreed.

Hard to continue acting as normal, my voice wavered when I asked for identification.  No, no identifcation, claimed it was in his wallet, he did find a library card…eventually.  Just the right amount of pocket checking, I wondered how often he’s done this.  Checked this carefully hoping to find some sign of him being real. Even asked his address, couldn’t get that right, thought, had to take the card back and read it.

I knew I had no choice, he was obviously not Thomas Findon as it said on the card.

Albert came when I called and I handed the card and check to him.  Used all our signals so he could take them out the back and dial 911.  The police are real fast in this area, I wouldn’t have to keep him long.  Couldn’t though.

Passing time by putting his purchases in a bag, I made some small talk.  Realised I should explain we didn’t keep that much cash on hand but that didn’t work.  When he saw me almost in tears he understood and promised to come back later.  We both knew he wouldn’t.

I came out from behind the counter when he started out the door and followed, calling his name, “Thomas”, then louder, “Thomas”. I knew he heard me as he didn’t run too hard, just enough to keep ahead.  He seemed so much like my boys so I didn’t call “Stop thief”, didn’t even want to.

“Ma’am”

“Ma’am” a little louder.

I looked up. “Sorry officer, where were we?”

“Finish your coffee, ma’am. Albert here tells me he can lock up.  You go with your boys at the Scout banquet.  Come by the station tomorrow to sign your statement.”

“That’s very good of you, Sergeant.  Thank you for being so prompt.”

“All part of the service. You take care now.”

Just as an aside here.  My teacher liked much about this story but she did suggest it could be written with a different starting point.  She suggested it would be more interesting having the lady see Wolff as she walked in the door. I’m not quite certain about that but I’ve done it her way. I’d appreciate comments at the end of this exercise, the revised version will be published on Friday 25th November.

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